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Its personal.

Sometimes the unexplained silence hurts.
Does that absence truly make the heart grow fonder?


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My preview is by =TiaraMia and the original can be found here: [link]

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:iconlacolombededeuil:
I know -


katti

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come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconanavah:
This is a very emotional piece which carries a powerful message. There are only a couple of things I would suggest that I feel would strengthen it:

heated nights
ecstasy; guided by heat

The use of heated/heat. Perhaps one of them could be replaced with something else?

P.S: I still love you.

This line lessons the impact somewhat. I really think that a

Yet, I still love you

Or something along those lines would be much more effective.

Again, a very emotionally packed piece even without the suggestions.

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:iconyouinventedme:
Mysterious blemishes
every feature is moralized
stolen, heated nights


excellent

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:iconkneelingglory:
Battered, empty promises
like weaving fantasies
quickly stripped naked
of their charms


What an opening. Break my heart in four lines, why dontcha? :heart:

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:iconskerd22:
Absence is a tricky thing.

Wonderfully written.
:iconth3krimzon1:
Beautifully done. :heart:

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:iconleoniesaintevire:
p.s...I still love you.

That says it all. ::smiles::

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"The question isn't who is going to let me; it's who is going to stop me."- Howard Roark
:iconleoraigarath:
Passionate, intimate and moving. Your writing, as always, strikes the right chords.... beautiful :hug:

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Some days I write those words, others they write me.
:iconpickled-poppy:
The opening to this is really rather stunning and heart breaking.

i adore these lines
ecstasy; aflame
never regained
Really lovely.

The ending is really rather sweet if not a little overused since the film.

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